July 1, 2002

  • I'll be writing some things about my wonderful trip soon, but for the moment, here's a poem I wrote for a new friend I met. It was written quickly, and is deliberately obscure so that even she wouldn't easily figure out its meaning. unlike most of my poems, this one has a title, but it's purely utilitarian...


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    For Sam


    When
    The time's burden laid simple and bleak
    Truth loses sight
    Soldiers lose conviction, wandering in thick air
    And the trainer becomes the trained
    Then must windows be resealed
    The hearth be fed and stoked
    And a short end bidden to long ago gone.
    Brief glimpse
    Painted on telescope with gossamer brush
    Wears tracks in the landscape green
    With or without the light feet of morning.
    In sleep, no delicate strands of heavy night
    In smile, no ships put to sea
    In time no time at all.
    And so the vision of walking rolling flight slide
    Hangs green as the air moves grey
    Strings tempered, jangling but sublime
    The moon revolves once again
    In her orbit round the sun's jest.
    And so, away.

Comments (10)

  • Hey J, welcome back from wherever you were. I like this poem... this line, especially, just now: "And a short end bidden to long ago gone."

    Take care,
    Linda

  • Hey.....thanks for stopping in to visit my site. Hope to see more of you soon!!

  • Thank for your comment . Nice poem .

    You ask me why I write in French and English .

    I write in French because I think in French since I am French ! Then I translate badly in English ( my English is poor ) for Xangans . Many of these appreciate the writing in 2 languages

    Amitié à toi

    Michel

  • I like the soldiers, they were a surprise.

  • thank you ...

  • Very Nice!  Btw ... I really enjoyed "True Love".  I'm going back to listen to some more.

  • Really nice poem.. and really nice comment you wrote on my site, thanks! All the best for you guys in Korea. I admire you guys way of thinking and I share the same ideas. Why should one limit one´s life to geographic bounders.... Hope to hear more about it and from you.

    Have a nice weekend!

  • that's so catchy somehow. not pop music catchy, hemingway catchy. i really like. thanks for sharing.

  • Hey, nice poem! and I way dig ur profile pic. It kinna resembles the inner sanctions of my mind actually... *giggles*

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